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MayFiolet on 18. May, 2012 — Lang: No text

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  • Eona 14.6.2012
    Pretty
  • syke 14.6.2012
    No way? Dave? Is that you man?
  • calm 21.5.2012
    Goodness....this is so much work...detailed work! I already saw the colored version. ~both are terrific! :-)
  • MayFiolet 19.5.2012
    @JerimiasWorld: I doesn't surprise me that there are art tutors on SG. I only learn out of books and not by art tutors. It would be nice if there was someone around my place who is an art tutor and could learn me more stuff about Manga/Anime :)
    But yeah, It is difficult to make Manga/Anime on SG. But you always have to try before you know it for sure ;)

    Thank you ^^
  • JerimiasWorld 19.5.2012
    I'm happy your not angry! ^_^ I'm actually an art tutor and most of the kids I work with want to learn anime, so I like to point things out. I find it's hard to make anime characters on Strip Generator so even I tend to stay away from it. But because of that I'll never get better.

    Good luck!!
  • MayFiolet 19.5.2012
    @JerimiasWorld: I'm glad you say these things. I did a very long time about this one, and I knew it wasn't perfect. This one is very difficult and it looks like I'm not really ready for these kind of things. But that's why I practice and become better. But good that you noticed ^^
  • JerimiasWorld 19.5.2012
    Sorry, I'm very picky about anime/cartoons... don't mean to sound like a b*tch or anything... Just some good ol' fashioned criticism.
  • JerimiasWorld 19.5.2012
    Her feet are too small, her face is weird, her thighs leading up to the curves of her bum aren't right. It looks like her bum doesn't go all the way to her back, but half way. Also, the back of the head should go back a little more. Oh and her ears are way too small and should be higher.
  • abrotons 19.5.2012
    do you know what?
    I'll watch your drawings from the beginning
  • abrotons 19.5.2012
    wow
  • MayFiolet 19.5.2012
    Thanks everyone!
    I'm very happy that you like it ^^
  • Fiolet 19.5.2012
    @MayFiolet, nope! I'm to lazy to read the description. Keke, I like to steal your words. (Well, yours..) x'D Toppiejoppie!
  • BaalMoloch 19.5.2012
    cool
  • wich 19.5.2012
    Nice
  • cirkuz 19.5.2012
    well done
  • gregheffleydude1 18.5.2012
    Awesome work.
  • asfaltocaldo 18.5.2012
    idem as ope - and lovely as it is
  • MayFiolet 18.5.2012
    Thanks everyone!

    @Fiolet: Ever heard of reading the discription ;)
    And don't steal my words D:<
    That's all :p
    Kesesesesesesesese >:D
  • Fiolet 18.5.2012
    Woah, awesome! Will you give it colours, or let it stay this way? I really like this version, but I'm curious to know how this strip would look with colours. :D [I already know, but still.. Kekekeseses.]
  • dawg123 18.5.2012
    Very awesome sketch!

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