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Broken

Spunkn on 31. Jan, 2010 — Lang: English

Broken

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    1. She left as she thought I was asleep,
    I can't stop her, she's not mine to keep.
    2. I feel so empty inside,
    It's like my heart has just died.
    All the things that will be left unspoken,

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    I am broken. She left as she thought I was asleep,
    I can't stop her, she's not mine to keep. II feel so empty inside,
    It's like my heart has just died.
    All the things that will be left unspoken,
    I am broken,

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  • Fiddler
    Arely 2.3.2010
    oralee no se bien que dice pero me conmueve ..... ñaaaa!!
  • Master
    mariofsa20 19.2.2010
    like the perfect woman
  • Shizzle
    Flamingdeath 8.2.2010
    Very poetic,just don't go standing alone on rooftops at midnight and you should have zero thoughts of jumping.
  • Shizzle
    Dorota 1.2.2010
    F A N T A S T I C !
  • God
    Spunkn 1.2.2010
    Thank you! It's a beautiful reply! Even if it didn't make it to publishing!
  • Emperor
    DepresiveNeko 1.2.2010
    im sorry.. mi strip reply, mi strip, mi internet...
    but printscreen not disable and paitn is ok...
    is there...
    http://depresiveneko.deviantart.com/art/strip-reply-152553971
    i am not mood creating this strip again...
  • God
    Maoriman 1.2.2010
    Yeah dude, I think you have just crossed into another plane with your art and poetry - bravo, bravo, bravo!
  • God
    NooniePuuBunny 1.2.2010
    aww... excellent art
  • Emperor
    DepresiveNeko 1.2.2010
    snif.. snif..
    depresive... not give up!
    i am stil here for you
  • God
    35sheep 1.2.2010
    good eyes - good strip!
  • Shizzle
    jZeno 1.2.2010
    very emotional...a vision with real sadness. human life is filled with loss...i hope for the best.
  • Shizzle
    dawg123 1.2.2010
    WOW I love the blue eyes this is really good!!!!
  • God
    SnakeYukin 1.2.2010
    Welp, never been there... yet.
  • Emperor
    terwallace 1.2.2010
    Been there, or a rough approximation of such. Always a bad day. Good strip though!
  • Regular
    vini1987 31.1.2010
    Just fantastic!
  • God
    MadameCercle 31.1.2010
    Misère ! ... C'est trop ...
  • God
    Spunkn 31.1.2010
    I think you're wires are crossed Streetin! Nothing like that!
  • Bwana
    camilon 31.1.2010
    So sad...Is very well realized the emotion. Cheer up!
  • Shizzle
    Streetin 31.1.2010
    Is this about the fight between Noonie and Depressive Neko? I remember that being called broken...and there, is that Neko? Maybe I'm just making things up!
  • Shizzle
    Flash 31.1.2010
    Sadness, but great work

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