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[4]Universe B: Witch Veronica Arrives

julian724 on 17. Jan, 2018 — Lang: English

[4]Universe B: Witch Veronica Arrives
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    Sorry that not much seems to be going on per-page. I'm trying to have actual characters and interactions rather than just saying things happen like I used to.

    Also @Neo I'm gonna do the thing I told you about, but Veroniq isn't that girl, this is just setting up some character bonds and friendships.




    Holy shit, what am I doing?!

    This is terrifying.

    But adventures are dangerous.


    Some no good lowlife messing with a defenseless person again.

    Neverdie Publishing

    Hole in The Wall

    Oh my god, I can't believe I'm doing this.

    Thanks for that, you two.

    I'm not usually so pathetic as to need help, but I forgot my wand.





    Neverdie Publishing

    Hole in The Wall

    Hole in The Wall

    Hole in The Wall

    Hole in The Wall

    Yeah, I'm a witch. Witch Veronica.

    Oh my god. This is real. This is happening. A witch.

    My name's Julian.


    Well you guys got any plans tonight? I'm new to town and I need to make some friends.

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  • NeoChomik 18.1.2018
    2 on 1 is hardly a challenge
  • abrotons 17.1.2018
    nice names
  • MadameCercle 17.1.2018

    (le temps dans la planche, comme le temps hors de la planche ne nous est pas compté - - - pas plus que le temps brûlé à fabriquer la planche) (- --j'espère)
  • craigdragon 17.1.2018
    The story seems to be progressing great to me!
  • richard_burkhart 17.1.2018
    I have the same issue. I find it easier to focus on one thing that has to happen per page. Anything else is gravy. Some times it is frustrating though to find the story hasn't moved much for three pages. It seems to work out okay in the end though. Keep up the good work.

    edited by owner

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