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Alice's Twisted Wonderland: Part 1

SnakeYukin on 17. Oct, 2010 — Lang: English

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Alice's Twisted Wonderland: Part 1
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    Alice in Wonderland (Dark Version)

    There once was a beautiful girl named Alice,
    She had a cat named Dinah and an older sis.

    Often Alice would sit under a tree and dream the day away,
    One day though, she saw a curious sight, I must say.

    There stood a drugged up rabbit with blood on his sleeve,
    He had a foul mouth and was in a hurry to leave.
    "I'm fucking late for my date!" He yelled as he scurried.
    "That Bitch of Hearts will have my head!" And off he hurried.

    Alice couldn't help but to follow the rabbit,
    Following strange woodland creatures had become a habbit.

    Into the rabbit hole they both went,
    Alice unaware of where she would be sent.

    Down the hole she fell with many things to see,
    A bloody knife, a used syringe, and a hungry flea,
    Cubbards filled with uppers, downers, pot, and meth,
    Let's not forget the dead girl whose name was Beth.

    Alice landed hard and there was a loud crunch,
    She feared something was broke and she'd need a crutch.
    She worried, cried, and even gave a frown,

    Till she found out she had just killed a clown.

    She was happy that her leg wasn't broken,
    No one cares for clowns, that needn't be spoken.

    She had landed in a curious place, to say the least,
    So many closets filled with skeletons or some scary beast.

    She was about to give up till she found herself in a new room,
    There was a little door, a table, and, well, you'll find out soon.
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    Yeah, I was planning on the art style to actually be much darker then what it was. However, after starting it, I like having a contrast between visual and story... and helps with a humor aspect. Horrible and dark things happening in such a bright and colorful word.

    And as you can tell, I done the audio before I did the visuals because the audio is darker in tone and voice. Anyways, let me know if you like the audio as I'll continue doing it if people do. I haven't really done any type of voice acting recently and I was able to get recording on my laptop to work, so I had to do something.

    Later parts in this will be getting a little more twisted.

    Anyways, here's the audio: http://skiegames.com/Alice/Part1.mp3

    This strip is a reply to Fairy Tale Contest

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    If you prefer to listen to the first part, there is an audio file below... I was bored and haven't really VAed in a bit. It doesn't match the visual style at all. There once was a beautiful girl named Alice,
    She had a cat named Dinah and an older sis. Often Alice would sit under a tree and dream the day away,
    One day though, she saw a curious sight, I must say. There stood a drugged up rabbit with blood on his sleeve,
    He had a foul mouth and was in a hurry to leave. "I'm fucking late for my date!" He yelled as he scurried.
    "That Bitch of Hearts will have my head!" And off he hurried. Alice couldn't help but to follow the rabbit,
    Following strange woodland creatures had become a habbit. Into the rabbit hole they both went,
    Alice unaware of where she would be sent. Cubbards filled with uppers, downers, pot, and meth,
    Let's not forget the dead girl whose name was Beth. Down the hole she fell with many things to see,
    A bloody knife, a used syringe, and a hungry flea,
    Alice landed hard and there was a loud crunch,
    She feared something was broke and she'd need a crutch.
    She worried, cried, and even gave a frown, Till she found out she had just killed a clown. She was happy that her leg wasn't broken,
    No one cares for clowns, that needn't be spoken. She had landed in a curious place, to say the least,
    So many closets filled with skeletons or some scary beast. She was about to give up till she found herself in a new room,
    There was a little door, a table, and, well, you'll find out soon.

    Tags:
    Wonderland, Alice, Alice in Wonderland, Rabbit, Twisted, Stephen SnakeYukin Lindsey, Stephen Lindsey, SnakeYukin
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